My lost story

                             

        My lost story!!!

On my 9th birthday my dad, Ashley, Alyssa (my cousin) and me.  We all went to hamuwanna zoo, I was very excited because we were all going on the one hour horse ride. We put on our helmets and started to ride.

I was so excited because we were Riding down to the sunny beach on the horses. But first we had to go into an orchard, me and Alyssa went a different way than the others and we did not notice but then it got really really quiet then I noticed I tried to tell Alyssa but she would not listen because she was daydreaming.

I started to panic then Alyssa finally listens to me then we see the other horses we felt relieved then we come back into the herd “where have you been” said dad “We had a big adventure” I say both looking at each other smiling.  

My reflection

I learnt to add paragraphs to my writing