Action Poem

              Jessica Ennis-Hill

           Javelin throwing

Poem 1

    A Javelin thrower

    Holding the Javelin right back

   Concentrating hard

Thank you poem

Dear Mum 😃

  I liked making the drive in movie car. The food was ice cream  but then it melted and turned  into soft serve and we had popcorn. I also liked looking at other peoples cars because some of them were really cool and they were all different shapes and sizes and they were all colored nicely.  

T-thanks for all your help on camp

H-happy always happy,even when things don’t go her way

A-always gives me positive thoughts  

N-nice to me whenever

K-kind and intelligent

S-she is really good at making the ice cream

S-Sarah you are a very very good cook

A-always helping make the lunch tea and all the other meals

R-really good at river crossing

A-awesome at spotlight

H-helps people when they get stuck

Again thank you for going on camp with me.

Many thanks Sienna G.😃

My poem week 10 term 3

WALT entertain the reader with an onomatopoeic poem

Success Criteria:

1. Use a dictionary and our sound/letter knowledge to write words I don’t know.
2. I will make sure the content relates to the title and creates a picture in the reader’s head.
3. I will make sure each word is on a different line.

Cinema

Pop pop

chew chew

rattle rattle

yay yay

laugh laugh

he he he

Goes the cinema, the movie and the popcorn machine