Monday, April 6, 2015

Ormie the pig Writing

We watched  a video of a pig called Ormie and this is what I thought happened...

Ormie gets in a plane to get the cookies that lay on the top of the fridge. As he gets closer and closer to the door of the plane, the more excited Ormie gets.
When he gets to the plane door, Ormie slid it open and then woosh out of the plane he went.
He started to see the fridge and the jar of cookies on top, he was about to flick out the parachute but Ormie forgot it...crash! 

Ormie fell to the floor.


He sat down and had a long long think until he jumped with excitement, "I've got it" he said, "all I need is a tiger". 20 mins later he got the tiger from the zoo and got on top of him, right take me to the fridge and put your paws on the top, then I can climb on top of you and grab the cookies. But the tiger wasn't listening and kicked Ormie off and he ran back to the zoo.


Now I need rocket shoes, Ormie set again out to town, back again with new rocket shoes.
"Its time to get these cookies" said Ormie. Woosh, up in the air, then whosh back down landing on top of the fridge. He sat down and ate the cookies one by one. Yum yum!

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